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The Salt House · Draft 2

04 · MOMENT

MOMENT — what the system read · confirm, amend, or cut, line by line

MOMENT — M4 “Mara takes the locket” · ¶12–15 · conf .78 · ⚑11 of 3
SOURCE

¶14 “She slipped the chain from her aunt’s still fingers and clasped it at her own neck. Sera would have wanted that.”

WHAT THE SYSTEM READconf · ¶
happen “Mara takes the locket from Sera’s body”.78¶14
├transfer(locket, sera → mara).82¶14
├setAttr(mara.wearing, locket).74¶15
└setStance(mara, believes, “Sera wanted her to have it”).55¶14
after this moment: locket with Mara · Mara wearing locket
⚑ QUESTION — the .55 line sits below the bar (.60):
How does Mara know Sera’s wish? … “from ch.3 ¶14 — confirm?”
CANON FROM THIS MOMENTdefine-term “locket of Wren”

chapter triage, one moment at a time: the source passage above what the system read · every fact line takes ✓ confirm · ✎ amend (inline, Enter to commit) · ✗ cut · a line below the confidence bar asks (⚑) instead of ruling · stage or reject stamps the card