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The Salt House · Draft 2

02 · RECEIPT

RECEIPT — the derivation chain · WHY, follow any step · two voices, one shape

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She can’t know this yet

rule: world.impossible-knowledge

“Elspeth references the altered will in Ch.7 sc.2 — she has no way to know it.”

Severity: PROBLEM under Drafting · would STOP THE EDIT under Lock
WHY — follow any step
  1. 1.
    Ch.7 sc.2, her line: “…since the will was changed.”[open line]sets believes(will-altered) via PERCEIVED — event e-2141 @ tick 3 977
  2. 2.
    The alteration: event e-1877 @ tick 3 960, Grayfriars study — but at tick 3 977 she is at Dover cottage. No co-presence.[open event]
  3. 3.
    And no other way in: her perceptual history to tick 3 977 holds no told / overheard / inferred / shown route for it.[open her view]
⇒ first-hand knowledge without presence, and no route in.
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Did we read this right?

F from your manuscript

One of these readings — or the story — has Marlow in two places at once.

ch.3 ¶14 reads as: boards the Nellie at dusk (conf 58%) · ch.1 ¶2 reads as: ashore on the quay (conf 91%)
WHY — follow any step
  1. 1.
    e-0312 move(Marlow → the Nellie) @ tick 214 · ingested ch.3 ¶14[open event]
  2. 2.
    e-0057 move(Marlow → the quay) @ tick 214 · ingested ch.1 ¶2[open event]
⇒ same-instant conflict; one cited reading sits below the confidence bar, so this asks — it does not rule.

left: the declarative verdict voice — fix-idea proposal branches, undo, “keep it anyway” with a required why · right: the same shape in the question voice (below the confidence bar it asks, it does not rule) · in 01 LEADER, receipts open live from the strip and their citations drive the playhead