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The Salt House · Draft 2

17 · STORYBOARD

STORYBOARD — the contact sheet, and the re-derive made visible · change a world fact: affected frames circle in grease, pulse amber, and RE-PRINT from scratch · unaffected frames provably hold still

THE SHEETthe-salt-house/draft-2 · 12 segments · 10 moments
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01820 · D6 · 16:40OBJECTIVE
ETthe will — with TamDAY
the reading of the will
Elspeth · Tam — the will: Tam
the will — read
021 200 · D9 · 08:00OBJECTIVE
Kthe knife — with KellMBDUSK
Kell’s vow on the quay
Kell · Marlow · Brody — the knife: Kell
031 395 · D10 · 16:30OBJECTIVE
Kthe knife — with KellMBDAY
the Nellie sails
Kell · Marlow · Brody — the knife: Kell
04
ELIDE
· · ·
render.elide-no-moment
052 600 · D19 · 01:20Kell POV
Kthe knife — with KellMBNIGHT
the storm breaks
Kell · Marlow · Brody — the knife: Kell
062 680 · D19 · 14:40OBJECTIVE
Kthe knife — with KellMBNIGHT
the letter read aloud
Kell · Marlow · Brody — the knife: Kell
07
INSERT
— THREE WEEKS PASS —
render.insert-non-diegetic
083 250 · D23 · 13:40OBJECTIVE
EKthe knife — with KellMDAY
the flooded cellar
Elspeth · Kell · Marlow — the knife: Kell
the cellar — flooded — spring tide
093 700 · D26 · 16:40OBJECTIVE
Bthe knife — with BrodyDAWN
the harbor gives up the knife
Brody — the knife: Brody
103 960 · D28 · 12:00Tam POV
Tthe will — with TamNIGHT
the will is altered
Tam — the will: Tam
the will — altered
114 200 · D30 · 04:00OBJECTIVE
Ethe will — with ElspethKMDAY
the will changes hands
Elspeth · Kell · Marlow — the will: Elspeth
the will — altered
the cellar — flooded — spring tide
124 250 · D30 · 12:20Elspeth POV
Ethe will — with ElspethKMNIGHT
the reckoning
Elspeth · Kell · Marlow — the will: Elspeth
the will — altered
the cellar — flooded — spring tide

the product's thesis performed: frames are pure derivations of the world at their anchor, so a world edit re-derives them — click an intent (the seal holds · Kell keeps the knife · the tide spares the cellar) and watch the §7 sequence: definite frames (the delta's direct entities intersect the frame) take the grease-pencil circle and amber pulse, frames under the covering bound (anchor ≥ earliestTick) watch amber, then affected frames re-print from scratch — never a morph — while every other frame provably holds still (content-keyed) · a watched frame can re-fold identical and clear (the bound is sound, not exact) — or re-print anyway (the knife walks into the reckoning) · ELIDE and INSERT derive no moment and say so with engine-style receipts · every card's strip counts its receipts + the 7 fields moment-spec/1 defers · the delta line under the hero quote is chronicle-level (engine derivationDelta verbatim) and admits the frame-mapping is the sheet's own